Religions Effect on People
Two Things you can Compare:
Religious people and non religious people
Three Ways you will compare them:
- As individuals
- In families
- And in the community
To inform the reader
Wednesday, September 29, 2010
Compare And Contrast Paper
Topic:
Religions Effect on People
Two Things you can Compare:
Religious people and non religious people
Three Ways you will compare them:
To inform the reader
Religions Effect on People
Two Things you can Compare:
Religious people and non religious people
Three Ways you will compare them:
To inform the reader
Saturday, September 11, 2010
First Draft
Religion’s Effect on the World
There are 22 different major religions worldwide (“Major Religions of the World
Ranked by Number of Adherents”). Religion is the practices of religious beliefs or belief in a god by a body of people (“dictionary.com”).Studies have shown that people who believe in a god are better off in their lives. Religion has been around since the beginning of time. But even with all of the positives of religion there always can be some negatives (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Thesis: The belief in a God has a positive impact on individuals, families, and the community.
The practice of religion has been proven to have a very positive effect on individuals (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). People who practice a religion are less likely to use drugs (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Also these individuals are less likely to commit any type of crime but mostly violent ones (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). In the religious community a young person has an opportunity to hang out with a good stable group of people so they are more likely to hang out with a better crowd. The belief in a god has also been shown to improve a person’s physical health (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Lastly suicidal rates and depression is way lower in cases of people who Practice a religion and believe in a god (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”).
Families are also impacted for the better when they practice a religion (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). The divorce rate among married couples is way lower in a religious family than in a non-religious family (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Also when a family is religious the relationship between the children and the parents is better (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Lastly families who believe in god and are religious have less violence in their family (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”).
The community as a whole benefits when its members practice the belief in a god. When people go to a place of worship regularly and practice religion they are more likely to make donations (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Also there is less violence in the community when there is involvement in the religious community (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Lastly the people in the community are more sensitive and compassionate towards on another, and they are more willing to serve people who are in need (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”).
Religion is an all around good thing for every individual, families, and the community as a whole. People are healthier because of a very low rate of substance abuse. People who follow a god secretly or publicly are more productive and a positive part of their family and community (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Studies have shown that people who believe in a god are, less likely to use drugs, more charitable and compassionate, are less likely to take part in violent crime and or be a juvenile delinquent (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Thesis- The belief in a god has a positive impact on individuals, families, and on the community.
There are 22 different major religions worldwide (“Major Religions of the World
Ranked by Number of Adherents”). Religion is the practices of religious beliefs or belief in a god by a body of people (“dictionary.com”).Studies have shown that people who believe in a god are better off in their lives. Religion has been around since the beginning of time. But even with all of the positives of religion there always can be some negatives (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Thesis: The belief in a God has a positive impact on individuals, families, and the community.
The practice of religion has been proven to have a very positive effect on individuals (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). People who practice a religion are less likely to use drugs (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Also these individuals are less likely to commit any type of crime but mostly violent ones (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). In the religious community a young person has an opportunity to hang out with a good stable group of people so they are more likely to hang out with a better crowd. The belief in a god has also been shown to improve a person’s physical health (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Lastly suicidal rates and depression is way lower in cases of people who Practice a religion and believe in a god (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”).
Families are also impacted for the better when they practice a religion (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). The divorce rate among married couples is way lower in a religious family than in a non-religious family (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Also when a family is religious the relationship between the children and the parents is better (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Lastly families who believe in god and are religious have less violence in their family (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”).
The community as a whole benefits when its members practice the belief in a god. When people go to a place of worship regularly and practice religion they are more likely to make donations (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Also there is less violence in the community when there is involvement in the religious community (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Lastly the people in the community are more sensitive and compassionate towards on another, and they are more willing to serve people who are in need (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”).
Religion is an all around good thing for every individual, families, and the community as a whole. People are healthier because of a very low rate of substance abuse. People who follow a god secretly or publicly are more productive and a positive part of their family and community (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Studies have shown that people who believe in a god are, less likely to use drugs, more charitable and compassionate, are less likely to take part in violent crime and or be a juvenile delinquent (“Why Religion Matters Even More: The Impact of Religious Practice on Social Stability”). Thesis- The belief in a god has a positive impact on individuals, families, and on the community.
Prewriting
Purpose- Write an essay explaining facts about god that the audience could use to learn about
Audience- Somebody interested in God’s
Situation- religion improves the lives of people
Know, Need To Know, Learned
There are different gods to each religion What are all of the different gods? God, Jesus, Buddha, Brahman, Allah
Religion causes disputes all over the world In what areas of the world are different gods worshiped the most?
Christianity is the most followed religion throughout the world How do gods impact people’s lives? • Religion is the law in some countries
• The belief in different gods has cause wars all over the world
• The presence of a God or religion in the life of a person can help him lead a better life.
The belief in god can have a huge impact on a youths life How many people believe in each god? 1)Christians - 2,116,909,552
2) Muslims - 1,282,780,149
3) Hindus - 856,690,863
4) Buddhists - 381,610,979
What are some controversies that the beliefs in different gods cause? Wars over gods and religion have been going on for hundreds of years.
What is the definition of a god? Any supernatural being worshipped as controlling some part of the world or some aspect of life or who is the personification of a force.
Outline
Thesis- The belief in a god has a positive impact on individuals, families, and on the community.
• Introduction
o 22 different major religions worldwide
o Studies have shown that people who believe in a god are
less likely to use drugs
More charitable and compassionate
Reduces violent crime
Less likely to be a juvenile delinquent
o Religion has been around since the beginning of time
o There are also some negative effects of religion
• Individuals
o Less likely to use drugs
o Less likely to commit crimes
o Hang out with a better group of people
o There are always exceptions
o Improves physical health
o Helps against depression
• Families
o Decreases likelihood of divorce
o Improves the relationship between the parents and the child
o Decreases family violence
• Community
o Donations increase when community goes to church
o Less violence in the community
o Men and women are more sensitive to each other
o More willing to serve to those in need
• Conclusion
o Religion is a all around good thing
o
Audience- Somebody interested in God’s
Situation- religion improves the lives of people
Know, Need To Know, Learned
There are different gods to each religion What are all of the different gods? God, Jesus, Buddha, Brahman, Allah
Religion causes disputes all over the world In what areas of the world are different gods worshiped the most?
Christianity is the most followed religion throughout the world How do gods impact people’s lives? • Religion is the law in some countries
• The belief in different gods has cause wars all over the world
• The presence of a God or religion in the life of a person can help him lead a better life.
The belief in god can have a huge impact on a youths life How many people believe in each god? 1)Christians - 2,116,909,552
2) Muslims - 1,282,780,149
3) Hindus - 856,690,863
4) Buddhists - 381,610,979
What are some controversies that the beliefs in different gods cause? Wars over gods and religion have been going on for hundreds of years.
What is the definition of a god? Any supernatural being worshipped as controlling some part of the world or some aspect of life or who is the personification of a force.
Outline
Thesis- The belief in a god has a positive impact on individuals, families, and on the community.
• Introduction
o 22 different major religions worldwide
o Studies have shown that people who believe in a god are
less likely to use drugs
More charitable and compassionate
Reduces violent crime
Less likely to be a juvenile delinquent
o Religion has been around since the beginning of time
o There are also some negative effects of religion
• Individuals
o Less likely to use drugs
o Less likely to commit crimes
o Hang out with a better group of people
o There are always exceptions
o Improves physical health
o Helps against depression
• Families
o Decreases likelihood of divorce
o Improves the relationship between the parents and the child
o Decreases family violence
• Community
o Donations increase when community goes to church
o Less violence in the community
o Men and women are more sensitive to each other
o More willing to serve to those in need
• Conclusion
o Religion is a all around good thing
o
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